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Đề tài: The traffic problems in our city and how to solve them

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    Talking The traffic problems in our city and how to solve them

    mong được cả nhà cho í kiến để bài viết cảu ḿnh được tốt hơn, em xin chân thành cảm ơn

    The development of the economy of the city has developed traffic. And of course, the development of traffic increases the traffic problems. In my opinion, there are two main problems of traffic in the city:
    The first problem is the loss of safety in traffic. The reason is the consciousness of the driver is poor. On the street, there are people who are not old enough to participate in traffic, participants do not wear helmets and More seriously, they drive very fast and many of them have an alcohol content in excess of the provisions of the law.
    The second problem is corruption in the police traffic. In some cases, they stand on the way to penalize the driver while she or he doesn’t break the law. And finally, the driver must pay a fine or bribe the traffic police to be freed.
    I think we need find and prevent corruption of the traffic police, to warn of the dangers when people take the traffic.
    Finally. the most important solution for the traffic problem is to increase the responsibility of the driver and the traffic police.


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    Trích Nguyên văn bởi xuxauxa Xem bài viết
    The development of the economy of the city not only developed traffic but also increased traffic problems. There are two main problems of traffic in the city.
    The first problem is the loss of safety. It is because of the consciousness of the driver is low. On the street, there are some people who are not old enough to participate in traffic. Besides. they do not wear helmets which can protect them from serious injures. Moreover, they drive very fast and many of them sometimes have an alcohol content in excess of the provisions of the law.
    The second one is the corruption in the law. In some cases, they stand on the way to penalize the driver while she or he doesn’t break the law. And finally, the driver must pay a fine or bribe the traffic police to be free.
    On one hand, I think we need to find a solution to prevent this serious corruption. On the other hand, people should be warned before taking part in the traffic.
    In my option, the most important solution for the traffic problem is to increase the responsibility of the driver and the traffic police.

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    The development of the economy of the city has developed traffic. And of course, the development of traffic increases the traffic problems. In my opinion, there are two main problems of traffic in the city:
    The first problem is the loss of safety in traffic. The reason is the consciousness of the driver is poor. On the street, there are people who are not old enough to participate in traffic, participants do not wear helmets and More seriously, they drive very fast and many of them have an alcohol content in excess of the provisions of the law.
    The second problem is corruption in the police traffic. In some cases, they stand on the way to penalize the driver while she or he doesn’t break the law. And finally, the driver must pay a fine or bribe the traffic police to be freed.
    I think we need find and prevent corruption of the traffic police, to warn of the dangers when people take the traffic.
    Finally. the most important solution for the traffic problem is to increase the responsibility of the driver and the traffic police.
    Bài của bạn ḿnh thấy về nội dung th́ khá ổn 2 ư chính rơ ràng. Vấn đề là cách diễn đạt của bạn, nhiều câu dài ḍng, bạn nên gộp lại sử dụng liên từ nối:
    The development of the economy of the city has developed traffic. And of course, the development of traffic increases the traffic problems. In my opinion, there are two main problems of traffic in the city:
    The first problem is the loss of safety in traffic. The reason is the consciousness of the driver is poor. On the street, there are (some) people who are not old enough to participate in traffic, participants do not wear helmets and more seriously, they drive very fast and many of them have an alcohol content in excess of the provisions of the law. ( lengthy)
    The second problem is corruption in the police traffic. In some cases, they stand on the way to penalize the driver while she or he doesn’t break the law. And finally, the driver must pay a fine or bribe the traffic police to be freed.
    I think we need (to) find and prevent corruption of the traffic police, to warn of the dangers when people take the traffic.
    Finally. the most important solution for the traffic problem is to increase the responsibility of the driver and the traffic police.
    Hope that you will have a better version !

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