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Đề ti: Dịch dm mnh 1 đoạn văn ngắn ny ra tiếng anh với, thanks nhu lắm, gip dm mnh!!!

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    Red face Dịch dm mnh 1 đoạn văn ngắn ny ra tiếng anh với, thanks nhu lắm, gip dm mnh!!!

    Dịch dm mnh 1 đoạn văn ngắn ny ra tiếng anh với, thanks nhu lắm, gip dm mnh với. Đừng dng google dịch rồi copy vo đy nha, cảm ơn nhu!!!

    Khi ti cn nhỏ, ti c một người bạn thn. Ti nhớ mi về người con gi đ. C ấy tn l Hằng. C ấy cũng l bạn cng lớp với ti ở trường trung học phổ thng. Bạn ấy 16 tuổi, cng tuổi với ti. Nh ti v nh bạn ấy rất gần với nhau. Điều đ lm chng ti trở nn cng thn thiết hơn.
    C ấy tuy khng đẹp nhưng lại rất dễ thương. C ấy c mi tc ng ả v mượt m. Gương mặt hnh tri xoan. Đi mắt long lanh v trn xoe.
    Cch cư xử của bạn ấy lm cho mọi người đều yu qu, đặc biệt l trong cch giao tiếp: chn thnh,thiện cảm v biết lắng nghe,chia sẻ. Bạn ấy đối xử với những người xung quanh khiến ti cng ngưỡng mộ với cch chăm sc n cần,chu đo v nhiệt tnh,nhất l với người gi v trẻ con.Tuy dng người thấp nhỏ nhưng nhanh nhẹn,ở đu c hoạt động tnh nguyện l ở đ c bạn ấy. Khun mặt lc no cũng cười rất tươi.Bạn ấy học rất giỏi v chăm chỉ. Cng ngy ti cng yu qu bạn ấy hơn. Ti v bạn ấy sẽ l đi bạn thn mi mi.


  2. #2
    Tham gia ngy
    Aug 2011
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    Mặc định

    When i was young,i had one bestfriend.i always remember her,her name is Hang.She's also my classmate in high school.She's 16 years old,the same as me.My home is very near to her home.that thing make us closer.although she isn't beautiful,she's very lovely.she have a shiny and smoothy hair.an oval face.
    đoạn 2 em thua ko biết đng ko nữa.anh em vo chỉnh dm nha.

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  3. Thnh vin sau cm ơn nascar2 v bi viết hữu ch

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  4. #3
    Tham gia ngy
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    Mặc định

    When I was child, I had a bestfriend. I always miss her. Her name is Hang. She was also my classmate in my high school. She was 16 years old like me. My house and her's was very near. That make us become nearer and dearer. Although she was beautiful enough to see, she was lovely. She had the shiny and smoothy hair. Her face was oval. Her eyes was sparkling and light (I don't know what word to "trn xoe, so...").
    Her behavior made everyone love, especially in her communication: heartfelt, thiện cảm, listening and sharing. She behave really solicitous, thoughful, and enthusiatic with everybody, especially older people and children. Although she was a little person, she was agile, so she have taken part in many volunteers. Her face often smiled. In addition, she learned well and hard-working. That make me love her more and more. Most of all, I and her will always be friends forever.

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  5. #4
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    Trch Nguyn văn bởi kutin0o Xem bi viết
    Dịch dm mnh 1 đoạn văn ngắn ny ra tiếng anh với, thanks nhu lắm, gip dm mnh với. Đừng dng google dịch rồi copy vo đy nha, cảm ơn nhu!!!

    Khi ti cn nhỏ, ti c một người bạn thn. Ti nhớ mi về người con gi đ. C ấy tn l Hằng. C ấy cũng l bạn cng lớp với ti ở trường trung học phổ thng. Bạn ấy 16 tuổi, cng tuổi với ti. Nh ti v nh bạn ấy rất gần với nhau. Điều đ lm chng ti trở nn cng thn thiết hơn.
    C ấy tuy khng đẹp nhưng lại rất dễ thương. C ấy c mi tc ng ả v mượt m. Gương mặt hnh tri xoan. Đi mắt long lanh v trn xoe.
    Cch cư xử của bạn ấy lm cho mọi người đều yu qu, đặc biệt l trong cch giao tiếp: chn thnh,thiện cảm v biết lắng nghe,chia sẻ. Bạn ấy đối xử với những người xung quanh khiến ti cng ngưỡng mộ với cch chăm sc n cần,chu đo v nhiệt tnh,nhất l với người gi v trẻ con.Tuy dng người thấp nhỏ nhưng nhanh nhẹn,ở đu c hoạt động tnh nguyện l ở đ c bạn ấy. Khun mặt lc no cũng cười rất tươi.Bạn ấy học rất giỏi v chăm chỉ. Cng ngy ti cng yu qu bạn ấy hơn. Ti v bạn ấy sẽ l đi bạn thn mi mi.
    As a child, I had a close female friend whom Ill always remember. Hang, her name, was also my high school classmate. Like me, she was sixteen years old. Thanks to a very close proximity between our houses, we became very close friends. She was not pretty but very lovely with a shiny and smooth hair, an oval face and a pair of round, sparkling eyes.

    Her conduct endeared her to everybody, especially the way she communicated, honestly and friendly as she knew how to listen and empathize. I really admired the way she treated people around her, very caring, thoughtful and whole-hearted toward everyone, particularly children and the elderly. Though small in stature, she was quite active with her omnipresence as a volunteer. There was always a smile on her face. She was very diligent and an excellent student. Each day I cherished her more and more. She and I would be friends forever.

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  6. 3 thnh vin cm ơn LHX v bi viết hữu ch

    blueskyvn94 (16-09-2011),Mui Ly (23-09-2011),smallchicken_vip97 (18-09-2011)

  7. #5
    Tham gia ngy
    Jun 2011
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    Quang Nam Province, Tam Ky city
    Bi gửi
    30
    Cm ơn
    13
    Được cm ơn 8 lần

    Mặc định Sorry!

    Trch Nguyn văn bởi LHX Xem bi viết
    As a child, I had a close female friend whom Ill always remember. Hang, her name, was also my high school classmate. Like me, she was sixteen years old. Thanks to a very close proximity between our houses, we became very close friends. She was not pretty but very lovely with a shiny and smooth hair, an oval face and a pair of round, sparkling eyes.

    Her conduct endeared her to everybody, especially the way she communicated, honestly and friendly as she knew how to listen and empathize. I really admired the way she treated people around her, very caring, thoughtful and whole-hearted toward everyone, particularly children and the elderly. Though small in stature, she was quite active with her omnipresence as a volunteer. There was always a smile on her face. She was very diligent and an excellent student. Each day I cherished her more and more. She and I would be friends forever.
    Thanks for your text. You're probably right in your comment. But please let me correct some errors in your contents.

    The first, you have written "Thanks to a very close proximity between our houses, No, nobody used "houses"in this case, we became very close friends." No, I think you need to write so:
    "Thanks to the close distances between our homes, we have become a pair of close friends soon."

    The second,
    "Her conduct endeared her to everybody, especially the way she communicated, honestly and friendly..."
    It'd be good thing for us if write so:
    "Her behavior toward everybody
    is really made some people increasingly admire more and more, especially the way of her communication, honestly and friendly, as she is also to listen and empathize her feelings...."

    Finally,
    "Each day I cherished her more and more. She and I would friends forever."
    No, maybe you hadn't better to use "simple past" here, if write "Everyday I admire and cherish her more and more than. She and I would be close friends forever."

    If I have caused any mistake in my text, please let me know and forgive me if possible. I'll trying my best in English and more than.

    Thanks and Regards
    Blue Sky 94.

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  8. Thnh vin sau cm ơn blueskyvn94 v bi viết hữu ch

    Mui Ly (23-09-2011)

  9. #6
    Tham gia ngy
    Aug 2011
    Bi gửi
    17
    Cm ơn
    5
    Được cm ơn 6 lần

    Mặc định

    Mnh xin gp cht.
    Trong trường hợp bạn dng so snh hơn: Nếu như so snh 2 đối tượng với nhau th bạn mới dng "than", nếu khng th bạn chỉ cần more ở trn l được rồi.
    more and more l so snh theo cấp độ "cng ngy cng", ko c than đằng sau như thế hi.


  10. 2 thnh vin cm ơn banana_409 v bi viết hữu ch

    blueskyvn94 (17-09-2011),Mui Ly (23-09-2011)

  11. #7
    Tham gia ngy
    Oct 2010
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    Mặc định

    Trch Nguyn văn bởi blueskyvn94 Xem bi viết
    Thanks for your text. You're probably right in your comment. But please let me correct some errors in your contents.

    The first, you have written "Thanks to a very close proximity between our houses, No, nobody used "houses"in this case, we became very close friends." No, I think you need to write so:
    "Thanks to the close distances between our homes, we have become a pair of close friends soon."

    The second, "Her conduct endeared her to everybody, especially the way she communicated, honestly and friendly..."
    It'd be good thing for us if write so:
    "Her behavior toward everybody is really made some people increasingly admire more and more, especially the way of her communication, honestly and friendly, as she is also to listen and empathize her feelings...."

    Finally, "Each day I cherished her more and more. She and I would friends forever."
    No, maybe you hadn't better to use "simple past" here, if write "Everyday I admire and cherish her more and more than. She and I would be close friends forever."

    If I have caused any mistake in my text, please let me know and forgive me if possible. I'll trying my best in English and more than.

    Thanks and Regards
    Blue Sky 94.
    My sentences were completely correct as written. You need to reexamine your own corrections as they contained numerous mistakes.
    It is perfectly OK to use the expression "thanks to a very close proximity between our houses" because the Viet text talked about the physical distance, and not about the emotional distance. Here is the principal difference between a house and a home:
    A house refers to a physical structure while "home" refers to the emotional place that is created inside a house with a family.

    Your correction written as "Thanks to the close distances between our homes, we have become a pair of close friends soon"
    contained grammatical errors as you should not use the present perfect when talking about a complete action, and not with an adverb indicating a near future action such as "soon". The Viet text described an action that happened in the past, that the two friends became close friends due to the close proximity between their houses.

    About the following correction:

    Her behavior toward everybody is really made some people increasingly admire more and more, especially the way of her communication, honestly and friendly, as she is also to listen and empathize her feelings...."

    not only contained numerous errors which were marked in red colors but the sentence itself was quite awkward and not English at all. It was like a word-for-word translation of a poorly structured Viet sentence.

    For the last sentence, the Viet text also talked about something in the past. The author started out by describing someone he or she knew in the past, not in the present. Therefore in the context of that scenario, the verb tense should be in the past.

    "Everyday I admire and cherish her more and more than. She and I would be close friends forever."

    more than what?

    In summary, in English we have a saying "Physician heal thyself" which means that before you try to correct other people defects, you must first attend to your shortcomings.





  12. 2 thnh vin cm ơn LHX v bi viết hữu ch

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  13. #8
    Tham gia ngy
    Jun 2011
    Nơi cư ngụ
    Quang Nam Province, Tam Ky city
    Bi gửi
    30
    Cm ơn
    13
    Được cm ơn 8 lần

    Mặc định

    Trch Nguyn văn bởi banana_409 Xem bi viết
    Mnh xin gp cht.
    Trong trường hợp bạn dng so snh hơn: Nếu như so snh 2 đối tượng với nhau th bạn mới dng "than", nếu khng th bạn chỉ cần more ở trn l được rồi.
    more and more l so snh theo cấp độ "cng ngy cng", ko c than đằng sau như thế hi.
    Thanks for your text. I got it! I'll trying my best in English "more and more" (there is no word "than"), Alright?


  14. Thnh vin sau cm ơn blueskyvn94 v bi viết hữu ch

    Mui Ly (23-09-2011)

  15. #9
    Tham gia ngy
    Jun 2011
    Nơi cư ngụ
    Quang Nam Province, Tam Ky city
    Bi gửi
    30
    Cm ơn
    13
    Được cm ơn 8 lần

    Mặc định Sorry! You're probably right.

    Trch Nguyn văn bởi LHX Xem bi viết
    My sentences were completely correct as written. You need to reexamine your own corrections as they contained numerous mistakes.
    It is perfectly OK to use the expression "thanks to a very close proximity between our houses" because the Viet text talked about the physical distance, and not about the emotional distance. Here is the principal difference between a house and a home:
    A house refers to a physical structure while "home" refers to the emotional place that is created inside a house with a family.

    Your correction written as "Thanks to the close distances between our homes, we have become a pair of close friends soon"
    contained grammatical errors as you should not use the present perfect when talking about a complete action, and not with an adverb indicating a near future action such as "soon". The Viet text described an action that happened in the past, that the two friends became close friends due to the close proximity between their houses.

    About the following correction:

    Her behavior toward everybody is really made some people increasingly admire more and more, especially the way of her communication, honestly and friendly, as she is also to listen and empathize her feelings...."

    not only contained numerous errors which were marked in red colors but the sentence itself was quite awkward and not English at all. It was like a word-for-word translation of a poorly structured Viet sentence.

    For the last sentence, the Viet text also talked about something in the past. The author started out by describing someone he or she knew in the past, not in the present. Therefore in the context of that scenario, the verb tense should be in the past.

    "Everyday I admire and cherish her more and more than. She and I would be close friends forever."

    more than what?

    In summary, in English we have a saying "Physician heal thyself" which means that before you try to correct other people defects, you must first attend to your shortcomings.

    Thank you very much. And now, I get it. I'll try my best in English to be more excellent in the next article. You're probably right while correcting my content. Yes, that's right. It was like a word-for-word translation of a poorly structured Viet sentence.


    But Excuse me, can you translate this sentence: "
    Physician heal thyself" into Vietnamese to help me. It feel so good if you would to do that. For me, it's such easily business that I'm able to get it, but maybe I can't quite conscious without your help. But, the only thing I probably wouldn't quite conscious your content is the following sentence:
    "
    Thanks to the close distances between our homes, we have become a pair of close friends soon"
    Yes, maybe I had made some syntax errors in my text, especially I was used to "soon" in that sentence ending. But I think, in addition it's not wrong about sentence's meaning, moreover, it'd be better if write so. Please explain obviously for me to quite conscious. Thank you!
    Sửa l̀n cúi bởi blueskyvn94 : 18-09-2011 lúc 11:14 AM


  16. Thnh vin sau cm ơn blueskyvn94 v bi viết hữu ch

    Mui Ly (23-09-2011)

  17. #10
    Tham gia ngy
    Sep 2011
    Nơi cư ngụ
    Ha Noi
    Bi gửi
    5
    Cm ơn
    1
    Được cm ơn 2 lần

    Mặc định

    When I was young, I had a close friẹnd. I always miss her. Her name was Hang. She was also my classmate at high school. Like me, she was 16 years old. My house and hers was very near. That made us become closer and clos.
    She was not beautiful but very lovelỵ She had shiny and smooth hair, an oval face, a pair round and sparkling eyes.
    Her behavior made everyone loved her, especially in her communication: loyal, enthusiatic, listening and sharing.
    I really admired the way that she treated with everybody, especially the ederly and children. Although she was small, she was active, she always appeared as a volunteer in everywhere. There was a smile on her face. She studied well and was hard-working. I become more and more love her. We will be close friends forever


  18. Thnh vin sau cm ơn DoThiAnhTuyet v bi viết hữu ch

    Mui Ly (23-09-2011)

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