Đề tài: Luyện viết theo các chủ đề
03-11-2008, 11:49 AM #1
Luyện viết theo các chủ đề
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- 03-11-2008, 12:53 PM #2
When people complain about a product or a service, some prefer to complain in writing and others prefer to complain in person. Which way do you prefer?. Use the specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Dissatisfaction from business’s products or services reveals signs of losing numbers of customers and decreasing profit, are needed to consider seriously. The possible solution to ask the business carrying its duty towards customers is to make a complaint. Usually, there are two possible ways to do that: either explicitly by having a conversation face to face or distantly by writing special letters. If such a choice can be made, a writing complaint letter put an advantage of avoiding getting conflicts in term of expressing ideas by verbal communication, keeping the information confidentially and saving cost of having a talk directly.
Firstly, the process of complaining is always considered to have a negative connotation. Having a conversation face to face requires negotiation and diplomacy skills, otherwise, intercourse can be problematic. For example: when one express his dissatisfaction carelessly without much sharpen in his speech, he definitely can’t prove his point and persuade or ask for compensation. However, writing a letter of complaint can takes time to think deeply into the issues and prepare fully all of arguments needed. Therefore, conflicts of both of sides won’t be bigger and solved peacefully and cordially.
Secondly, expressing your opinions on the paper and send to who has the authority to resolve is the way to keep such personal information confidentially, especially the business that you complain relating to politics. For example, if one’s complaint relating to malfeasance or corruption of a business, serves badly to customers but still remain their fame and selling market, writing can disguise his real name and protect what he complained secretly. Therefore, all the information on the letter can’t be sealed and hidden by whatever organization.
Thirdly, writing a letter is much cheaper and convenient in some cases. For instance, if the business that one wants to complain requires a flight to talk directly, writing in this case the most effective and inexpensive. He can stay at home to write a complaint letter and send to whatever place all over the world just a few days and costs less.
In conclusion, although having a talk verbally can solve problems immediately, it still takes risks of disclosing personal information, having not enough arguments to solve the issue and costing money to complain in person. Admitted, writing- non-verbal explanation, has its own advantage in compared to directly verbal complaint in person.
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03-11-2008, 02:13 PM #3
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which view of point do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support.
The primary goal of advertising is generating more profit for shareholders and its owners, who invested money in. Although, advertising provides fully and sufficient information about new products that may improve out lives, it always encourage us to buy as much as possibly even we buy for useless purposes. The existence of an advertising contract is always based on numbers of customer, fell over on it due to its temptation and attraction of false measurements and judgments on human being and our possession of exotic goods curiously without necessity.
Firstly, everyone is likely to polish their own ego and has measurements to judge on other people around. We tend to keep up with our neighbors, friends and relatives to define what we own and makes us different. For example, in order to acknowledge our position in the community we living with, we spend a lot of money on buying the latest and luxurious model cars, having all the technologically modern gadgets in our homes and having a snobbish lifestyle over our budgets sometimes we don’t really need. Admittedly, advertising attracts people to buy needless things by creating false values and measurements on judging people. In fact, it encourages a endless competition of virtual values and shallow measurements of what raises more cash profit for business.
Secondly, new products on TV always prompts our curiosity that makes us anxious to have them. Human being intend to enrich and perfect their life by enjoying new technology, colorful wrapping and convenient features. All of these abilities always appear on new products, that tempts us to get rid of old-fashioned models and buy the latest ones without necessity. For example, if one owns a mp3 digital players, he could buy the same player by its different vivid color and added features; even his old one still works well. Consequently, new products are, designed to wake up human being’s curiosity inside, upgraded needlessly.
In conclusion, even though advertising introduce the latest technologies of new products to our home, it’s wasteful to equip if we just want satisfy our ego and replace old goods necessarily. Every coin has two faces: positiveness and negativeness . For these reasons, we have to admit that advertising is necessary evil.
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03-11-2008, 05:40 PM #4
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03-11-2008, 06:06 PM #5
Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machine. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the ancient time, human have produced many tools to help their work. Admittedly, machines play an important role in creating a comfortable world and we can’t imagine how to live without the assistance from them. However, we shouldn’t underestimate the value of working by hand.
Man-made products are usually worthier than machine-made products, especially in creating art works such as sculptures, paintings and other artistic works, are filled with the artist’s spirit and extraordinary talent which nothing can replace. For example, a
a famous hand-draw such as Mona Lisa drew by Leonard DaVinci, are priceless and completed with uncountable hours and appreciated effort. Therefore, never had such a machine is capable of producing immortal art works.
Secondly, doing by hands sustain good health if we practice properly. For example, in the old day farming, people had to use their labor force to plow soil, to scatter seeds and water plants such good examples. Today there are numerous tools to support their work such as tractor, cutter and water pumps. Comfort in labor force has a adverse in health such as being obese and tired due to much idle time. Consequently, working in the field is good physical exercise and help from machines means less exercises, which certainly affects human’s health.
Thirdly, labor working gets full of pleasure. For example, in rural areas, some products are cooperated by many people in the village, are such as basket – is made of kind of bamboo which is slender, thronless and long-sectioned. As a matter of fact, many people come together and share works, creating an atmosphere of laughter and stories while their children playing around there. Therefore, the advent of machines results in less communication.
Although the support from machines are highly evaluated, we can’t look down on manual labor. Sometimes, people depend on machines too much even though they are not necessary. We control machines, not machines control us.
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03-11-2008, 06:13 PM #6
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20-03-2010, 10:25 PM #10
Bạn coi câu này đi, một subject mà có 2 verb: " Dissatisfaction from business’s products or services reveals signs of losing numbers of customers and decreasing profit, are needed to consider seriousl." Nên sửa là: Dissatisfaction from business’s products or services WHICH reveals signs of losing numbers of customers and decreasing profit NEEDS SOLVING SERIOUSLY.
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