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    Mặc định Topic 4: The role of women in your country

    The writing topic is:

    Do you think the role of women in your country is changing and in what ways?
    Do you think these changes are for the better?

    (From Mr Ng's class)

    Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience, as well as relevant examples to support your argument



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    Thanks and best of luck for you


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    Nowadays, the role of women has become much more dominant than it used to be in the past. It's the fact we can't deny that the liberation of the women from domestic duties and subservient status has actually brought them an independently social equal position or superior to that of men. Furthermore, it's easy to detect in Vietnam that women' role is still changing in both family and social functions in modern community for the better.

    From the archaic centuries in any eastern countries like Vietnam, women had been underestimated for their feeble and forbearing nature. Therefore, the sterner sex always claimed superiority of ability and looked down on the fair sex. Therefore,only men could study and work while women must be stay at home to take care of household duties. That's what happened in the past, how about the moment? Of course, women still do housework but now the vocation is also shared with men. In some families, the fathers help their wives to pick children up, organize the furniture of the house and even wash clothes or cook meals. It seems that domestic duties are ascribed to both men and women since women also have their own jobs like men.

    Women also take part in many social functions of the communities. There are women ambassadors, ministers, women commander-in-chiefs and senators in Vietnam. They even achieve high positions in their companies or offices. In my opinion, women are better managers than men, since they attain such mild and lenient delicacies to settle tense affairs in the most suitable, convenient ways. They also get the calmness and composure to face with difficult, puzzling and urgent problems rather than being impatient like men. Moreover, women have also got the confidence to stand out among men.

    In conclusion, women's role is becoming more and more prominent in the society. Their functions are now quite active and this definitely will make the world better since both men and women can work together to improve and build it more perfect.

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    The equality of women with men is a new concept in vietnam in particular and in the world , in general.It has been raging for sometimes now.Women always play an important role in society .However, in the past their role weren't appriciated . They only tried to become good wives and mothers. they were subseriment to men and were happy to bring up a healthy family and see their children well placed in life.They looked after many chores of the house and it became naturally tothem.Women were looked on for long as a weeker sex and they were to be protected by men .Nowadays ,Everything has changed . Women have proved that they can do everything as men can .Now Women have taken to careeing , their equality has come up and we can find factories and offices working along with men. women take part in every fields such as economic , education , army , technology even politic . In each field they always try their best and have responsibility . In fact , there are many bright examples about talented women .however they haver never fogotten their role in the family . After working time they spend almost of free time for looking after their children and houseworks They always try to make the best meals and comfortable life for their family. Besides. they are eager to take part in social activities and help comunity .however , in some places especially in distant and poor areas women always have to suffer from the unfairness . the act of violence in the family is happening . the factories and companies do womenan injustice. those things have to be prevented. Society can't develop without women. Respect them and so do they . That will make our world better and better.

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    Women used to be unrespected in the old day.They had to attach to housework and never went to school. Their main work was to uphold race.They were over head and ears in child bearing and reairing. They used to be treated badly and put under compulsion especially in the countries of the East. In China, people used to value man above woman in part because of the influence of Confucius' thinking on Chinese.There were many rules that made difficulties for them.
    Nowadays, our epoch has changed. Women have more chance to prove their worth than they used to before.They are more self-motivated, youthful and talented. They become an interal part of our life as well as our society. They don't have to busy themself with the housework. They have more free time to do whatever they want like pursueing the education and career. They have their own right. And nothing can deny their role in this society.They make our life more lively and meaningful. Imagine that one day, without women what would the world be? It's hard to answer cause this will never happen.


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    Post the role of women in my country, Viet Nam

    The role of women in your country

    Throughout history, Women always was situated an important and necessary position in Viet Nam but at each time we have different views about the role of women. In feudal society, women would be a person that would sacrifice their whole life for husband and children; and they always were put the disadvantages. They hardly stayed at home, raised the children and did all housework that was all. In modern society, these contributions and role of women in family, also in society, are changing days and days. Women’s role were highly appreciated by achievements and great results what they did to do and have brought about an awareness of the role of women in the recent years.
    In the past day, the role of women was undervalued and did not respected in society by our view of point of Vietnamese. They only had the right to do something in their house as serving meals, washing clothes and tidy up their house. They did not treat as a equal with man if they worked outside door. Is this till right in modern days? No, of course. They won to fight with man over a equal right in the Woman Revolution Movement and now they do everything they can and must be treated equally with man. Women stay at home is recognized as a valued member of society just as much as the one who deals on the stock market.
    Nowadays, we could see more and more successful women on the newspaper. They achieved the big awards in sport, economic, science and technology… even thought in politics. Madam Truong My Hoa – Vice President of Socialist Republic of Viet Nam, Mme Ha Thi Khiet – Member of the Centre Party Committee, President of Viet Nam Women Union, President of the National Committee for the Advancement of Women who have been joining their hands to fight poverty. They are a remarkable imagine to represents for character of Viet Nam women is gentle, faithful and capable. At home they are good wives and excellent mothers. They not only take care of their family, serve meals, wash clothes and tidy up their house but also are the moral mainstay of their husbands and children/ give moral support to their husbands and children. That is a important role of woman in their family besides they have a lot more opportunities than before to work in our society as doctors, lawyers, teachers, nurses. They can earn money for their family and help people in society. Women’s hands will make our life more comfortable than in the past days.
    In general, the role of women in Viet Nam and over the world have been a change in trendy better. They have more positions in society and accomplish their role that not be treated unequally with man. They should be respected about their contributions and need more helps of everyone to fight with poverty, violent in family which are still in our country. Society will be better with women’s hands, that is truth.
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    When western culture traveled to Vietnam in the twentieth century, the concept of women’s position has change gradually. Many movements were held to claim right for women. Therefore, the role of women is changing better both in home and society.
    Going back to forty years ago, man is the only person who could make decision in the family. The woman couldn’t go to work or go out of the house. Her main duties is cooking and serving other family members. But now everything has changed, the modern women can have a job after getting married. The housework is shared by the wife and her husband, including educate and take care of their children.
    Besides being a wife, the women also help community. They are doctors, scientists, businesswomen… Some of them have great achievement. Moreover, the women can join in military and government, and they take part in social activities which are only for men before. There are woman vice president Truong My Hoa, president of Vietnam women union Ha Thi Khiet, ambassadors, ministers, and commander-in-chief.
    The equality of women is better than it was in old day. However, there is still unfair treatment between male and female. Many women, especially rural women, have to suffer family violence.
    In general, the women nowadays play an important role in our society. They not only try their best to be a good wife, but they also are ambitious and responsible employees. They have proved that they can do as well as men do, and they can be good partner.


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    Em mới tham gia lần đu mong mọi người gip đỡ em nha

    Topic 4:


    My country vietnam is a developing country . The economic is developing so the awareness of people is changing in positive way
    .It can’t deny that the role of Vietnamese women is changing in family and society .the fact that these changes are the better that make our society more beautiful .
    Firstly , the change of the role of women in family is expressed by their function , position , interst .If a long time ago , in ancient families , women just stayed at home , did house work , served husbands and werer dependent on them , noe this situation changes .Women have important role not only in family work but also earn money for family.They can earn themselves , can buy everything for family , can prove their domination . For example , at the moment , in many families women seem to be pillars , not men . Even women can earn more much money than their husband and can give the final decisions in almost things . I can say that Vietnamese women ‘s positions are definite more clearly .
    Secondly, the role of women in society is changing obviously . It is expressed in their promotion in career and social activities .Different from pld women who just had to stay at home all day with the dificiency of knowledge . Now , modern women can go to school to study what they want. The fact that there are many famous women in many fields : teaching , curing , researching , etc . It is not strange if a woman is a directot or someone like that . If you notice some digits , u can see the number of girl monitor is more than the number of boy monitor , the secretary is also . Obviously , women now can heighten their role .Furthermore , women take part in social activities that relate to the development of the economic and politic .They can hold high positions in society . For example , the deputy premier is Truong Mi Hoa , the famous women is Ton Nu Thi Ninh .. I can recognize that these changes are the better . Women incude the resourseful feature and the strength . AS a result , they can handle perfectly both family and social dutis , They are peole who are taking part in builing our country .

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    In the world, women make up more than 50 percent population. Therefore, women have a very important role in our society. Viet Nam is an asian country, we experienced many different history stage. The role of women is different in each period.
    In feudal society, women obey arrangement of your parents. They married when they were young and they were not free to choose a husband who they loved. They never went to school and joined social work. Their main works include to take care of children and do housework.
    In modern society, there isn’t image of women only do embroidrey, do housework but they join more and more social works and active contribute to economic development of country. They can earn as much money as man, keep important positions in society, but they still take care of your family. Today, the role of women little by little were asserted by society.

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    Topic 4:
    When western culture traveled to Vietnam in the twentieth century, the concept of women’s position has change gradually. Many movements were held to claim right for women. Therefore, the role of women is changing better both in home and society.

    Going back to forty years ago, man is the only person who could make decision in the family. The woman couldn’t go to work or go out of the house. Her main duties is cooking and serving other family members. But now everything has changed, the modern women can have a job after getting married. The housework is shared by the wife and her husband, including educate and take care of their children.

    Besides being a wife, the women also help community. They are doctors, scientists, businesswomen… Some of them have great achievement. Moreover, the women can join in military and government, and they take part in social activities which are only for men before. There are woman vice president Truong My Hoa, president of Vietnam women union Ha Thi Khiet, ambassadors, ministers, and commander-in-chief.

    The equality of women is better than it was in old day. However, there is still unfair treatment between male and female. Many women, especially rural women, have to suffer family violence.

    In general, the women nowadays play an important role in our society. They not only try their best to be a good wife, but they also are ambitious and responsible employees. They have proved that they can do as well as men do, and they can be good partner.

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    I am a women. I believe the roll of Women in Vietnam now is much improved in comparision with the past. New technology and progressive opinions help to reduce house workload of women. Thus we can participate better to society. Such changes bring benefits to women and society in general. Allow me to compare women's life in the past (my grandmother) and in modern life (myself), thus we may see clearly the movement of women's roll.
    My grand mother has been born in a rich family in a countryside area. She was not allowed to go to school. When she's 15, she get married with my grandfather. Then she had been delivered 9 children. Her life is totally tied with housework and taking care of children. She does not have any job. Even she couldn't joint election because she doesn't know reading and writing.
    Conversely, I wasn't born in a rich family, but I am allowed to go to school until I finished Bachelor degree. Curently, I have my own familỵ I can limit number of chỉlden ll have. My house have some facilities like washing machine, multi rice cooker, vacuum cleaner... Thus I can reduce much time to spend on house wọrk Beside, my husband is ready to share house work with me. Therefore, I can work and get promoted in my companỵ I can go out to have dinner with my friends or attend eletion.
    From above 2 contrary pictures, you may find women in modern life is quite different and improved in comparision with the past. However, there are still some barriers pertaining like some companies prefer men than women, housework still be considered as women job... We need to continue to fight to destroy such barrier and bring equality and hapiness for women and society in general.

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