write a letter inviting your friend to visit your country for a week.

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No.27/575 Kim Ma street, Ba Dinh distric,Ha Noi capital.
March,25th,2008.
513,Oldman street,Luala Lumpur.

Dear my friend.
Well, If you are many free time ,you will to visit my cuontry for a week. My parents and I are so happy at you return my country.Ha Noi capital is extremely beautyful.It’s well known for its centres of business and other activities.There are many places of interest such as Chua Mot Cot, Van Mieu Quoc Tu Giam….There are also many important centres of learning such as the university of Ha Noi ,university of polytechnic.Being a famous city with the long history ,so hundreds of people come every day from various parts of the world to do business or to enjoy the sights of the city .To here rou can visit well known Ha Noi ancident street with pear-tree park long time history ,Thu Le garden, Le Nin park …Our promenade round the lake Hoan Kiem on the morning to enjoy nice the summer .Neither , only however you can go to shooping ,icream Trang Tien ,buy something at the Dong Xuan market ….In the evening , you can take a walk streets ,drink coffee , go to the cinema….And my country have many something good . Ha Noi capital is very beautiful,isn’t it? .So , I wait you will visit my country .My parents and I hope you can meet again in a recent days

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Dear my friend.
Well, If you are havemany much free time ,you will to should visit my country for a week. My parents and I are so happy at you return my country if you return here.Ha Noi capital city is extremely beautyful.It’s well known for its centres of business and other activities it's well known as a big centre of business and ....<-- cai nay minh chua nghi ra nhung ko nen cho la other activities.There are many places of interest such places as Chua Mot Cot, Van Mieu Quoc Tu Giam….There are also many important centres of learning important learning centers ( important cua minh chua chac da important cho no dau ban ah) such as the university of Ha Noi University,university of polytechnic.Being a famous city with the long history ,so hundreds of people come every day from various parts of the world to do business or to enjoy the sights of the city <-- hinh nhu lon ngu phap gi do. Being a famous city with a long history, everyday it attracts hundreds of people from various parts of the world to do business or enjoy the city's beatiful sights.To here Here you can visit well known Ha Noi ancident Hanoi's well-known ancient street with pear-tree park long time history ,Thu Le garden, Le Nin park …Ourwe promenade round the lake Hoan Kiem lake on in the morning to enjoy nice the summer nice summer morning.Neither , only however you can go to shooping ,icream Trang Tien ,buy something at the Dong Xuan market besides, you can go shopping, eat trang tien icecream or buy something at Dong Xuan market ….In the evening , you can take a walk along streets ,drink coffee , go to the cinema….And my country have has many something good things . Ha Noi capital is very beautiful,isn’t it? <K== thu thi ko nen the nay thi phai .So , I wait you will visit my country so, i wait for your visit to my country .My parents and I hope you can meet again in a recent days my parents and i hope that we can meet again in a recent day.

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