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i am a sudent,every summer i came back my country but last year summer i went to HA LONG BAY with my family.we are stayed three days.the climate in H L bay is very cool.people is very kind,funny,friendly.the food is very beautiful .we are usually eated seafood in the morning.in the afternoon i and my brother go swimming we are swimming very much in a day,my parents are walk together in the beach.
when come back home i feel remember HA LONG BAY very much,i hope i can come back H L bay in a day nearest.
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i am a sudent, every summer i
came often come back my countryside/village, but last year summer i went to/visited HA LONG BAY with my family.we are stayed there in three days/but last summer, we spent 3 days together visiting Ha Long bay.the climate in H L bay is was very cool.people is were very kind,funny,and friendly.the food is was very beautiful delicious.we are usually eated seafood in the morning.in the afternoon, i and my brother my brother and I(trong tiếng anh, ngôi I luôn đứng sau) go went swimmin. we are swimming swam very much in a day,my parents are walked together in the beach/ in the afternoon, my brother and I went swimming while my parents enjoyed walking together in the beach.
come came back home/ when coming back home, i feel remember I feel that I miss HA LONG BAY very much/ I feel that Ha Long is an unforgettable place,i hope i can come back H L bay in a day nearest.
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Last summer, i went to Dalat city with my family. We were there by car, b/c it’s very far from my house. So we were very tired, but at one we feel better when we arrived here.
Dalat city or call is “foggy city”. there have many flower and the weather is cool. Dalat is famous for many beauty spot and fog. We stayed in White Star Hotel in about 7 days. It was a very nice and comfortable hotel.
Next morning, we get up early at 5.00 a.m to be go for a walk along Xuan Huong lake and enjoy fresh air. Then, we go to the market buy some special food such as strawberry, atiso, tea, vegetable,… etc and shopping. In addition, we still visit beautiful scenery in Dantala fallwater and take the cable car to admire the city and the forest. We took a lot of beautiful photographs.
I love Dalat. It was a great holiday, I hope to go there again
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