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26-06-2007, 08:40 PM
cc bạn gip mnh sửa nhanh với nhen
many students want to study abroadfor many reasons.First,studying abroad might help you improve your language skills, get into choice colleges and future jobs.Second,you will gain self-confidence,living away from home can also help you adjust in the transition to college and adulthood
another reason for studying abroad is that you will experiance new customs,holidays ,foods...,learn more about cultures,people and yourself.Do try your best to study in a different learning environment and with your ability ,you will gain a future job that you like:)
xin cc bạn sửa lỗi cho mnh với
thank you very much

26-06-2007, 08:45 PM
bạn ơi, mở đầu một câu thường là trạng từ nên phần kia là Firstly và Secondly mới đúng

26-06-2007, 09:46 PM
phần kia mình nghĩ là Doing try your best.........

27-06-2007, 04:59 AM
You made too much mistake so i may fix a lot in your essay, but it is perfect now !!!:smilie_goodjob:
Here :

There are many reasons that make many students want to study in another country. First, abroad study could help the students by improving their language skills because they could practice the language more often, and knowing more language would become easier for them to find a good college and a better job in the future. The second reason is that when the students live far away from their family, they could learn self-confidence, which also helps them practice to adapt to a new environment. Another good thing about abroad study is that the student could experience and learn more about the culture from different country. It does not matter where you live, if you try your best you will have a bright future waiting ahead of you.