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pianodream
11-06-2007, 03:49 PM
mnh sắp phải nộp chiều nay
mong cc bạn sữa gim mnh nha!!!!
The diagram shows the process when a manuscript is given to acquisitions editors. This report will discuss the process in details.
Fristly, the manuscript is sent to acquisitions editor, if the manuscript is accepted , it will be sent to specialist readers. And opposite, if the manuscript is not accepted, a letter will be sent to author.
Secondly, if the manuscript is highly appreciated by the specialist readers, the acquisition editor will receive it. And if it isnt accpeted by the specialist readers , a letter will be sent to author.
Thirdly, acquisitions editor posal for the agreement form budget committee. If it is approved, a letter is sent to author. If it isnt , a letter is sent to athor , too, and after that, the manuscript can be taken elsewhere.
Finally, when the author receive the letter form acqisitions editor, the bilateral
negotiations will be carried on.

pianodream
11-06-2007, 03:59 PM
sao không ai help giùm mình hết vậy , thế này thì chết mất

Fusilier De Francais
11-06-2007, 04:45 PM
Lỗi 1: Acquisitions editors thành acquisition editor.
Lỗi 2: This report will discuss >>> This report discusses
Lỗi 3: It will be sent >>> It is then sent
Lỗi 4: And opposite >>> On the contrary
Lỗi 5: A letter >>> The letter
Lỗi 6: to author >>> to the author
Lỗi 7: If it is approved, a letter is sent to author. If it isn’t , a letter is sent to athor , too,>>> If it is either approved or not, the letter is sent to the author.
Lỗi 8: You should determine whether "bilateral negotiations" or "bilateral negotiation".

quynquyn
12-06-2007, 10:20 AM
đồng ý nhưng có 1 số chỗ ko hỉu:
1/dùng bilateral negotiation mới đúng
2/acquisitions editor posal for the agreement form budget committee câu này mình ko hiu.POSAL là gì vậy
3/minh nghĩ it will be sent là đúng rồi,ko đc sửa lại it is then sent.
4/ minh nghĩ and opposite hình như cũng đúng,ko cần thay thế đâu.