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03-07-2006, 01:29 AM
How is luck related to success?

I fully agree with the claim that there is no correlation between success and luck. Moreover, I understand success to refer to one’s ability to achieve the predominant part of his goals in his lifetime, which in turn leads to a correlation between success and income since the accomplishment of such a natural goal as to provide a good future for your loved ones demands the means.

What is the simplest and most lawful way to earn enough to consider yourself a successful person? To receive a good education and to find a good job. Both receiving an education and making a career presuppose one’s readiness to work hard, and success without hard work is simply not possible for the vast majority of the world's population. The reasons and examples listed below will strengthen my point of view.

First of all, considering an education and a career as key factors of success, one will choose to pursue a degree from a college or a university. One wishing to be admitted to the university will have to take several tests. It is doubtful that someone will be so lucky that knowing nothing, he could pass the test with a high score. A low score means failure, and that test taker will not likely be admitted. Therefore, in order to be successful, one should prepare for the tests and work hard, because a good education will provide him with a good job and an opportunity to accomplish some of his goals and dreams. In my lifetime, I have never met a person who could graduate from a college without working hard.

Secondly, it is impossible to make a career if one is indolent and lacking knowledge, at least in developed countries. Luck plays no role in achieving this success. Even if someone was unbelievably lucky enough to become a manager not being qualified enough, he will be asked to resign in the near future because of his inability due to lack of knowledge and experience to make right decisions. For instance, I used to work for a very small company owned by a friend. This company was later closed because of bankruptcy. The cause of bankruptcy was wrong strategies and decisions made by the owner. After the failure, he went to a university and worked for another company so that he could obtain experience and become a successful businessman. Nowadays, he considers himself a successful person because he had turned into reality his two biggest dreams of producing consumer goods of high quality and making charitable donations to needy people.

In sum, as long as someone understands success as an ability to turn into reality some of his dreams and goals, he will have to work hard because he will need money. And his chances to earn that money will remarkably increase if he could graduate from a college and make a career. All of these things are simply not possible without hard work. Luck has no place in such a scheme of events.

23-02-2007, 07:26 PM
Bài này chắc 6 điểm á... đó là mình chấm...hì...hì

Phan Nhật Nam
07-03-2007, 10:23 AM
Mọi người ơi! Em có 1 bài essay mà em vẫn chưa biết cách lạm Có ai có thể làm mẫu cho em bài này để em học hỏi ko a?

Topic : Why do you want to study at City College?

Khi làm bài thì cố găng làm 5 đoan.
1 là phần mở bại
2,3,4 la 3 nguyên nhân
5 là kết luận
Em cám ơn

09-03-2007, 09:38 PM
cám ơn bạn nhiều nha ráng phát huy tiếp

09-03-2007, 10:09 PM
Mọi người ơi! Em có 1 bài essay mà em vẫn chưa biết cách lạm Có ai có thể làm mẫu cho em bài này để em học hỏi ko a?

Topic : Why do you want to study at City College?

Khi làm bài th́ cố găng làm 5 đoan.
1 là phần mở bại
2,3,4 la 3 nguyên nhân
5 là kết luận
Em cám ơn
Đây là statement purpose của trường em muốn học, em phải tự viết đi chứ, làm sao có ai viết dùm được (mà h́nh như em mở mấy topic giống nhau th́ phải?)

17-03-2007, 03:38 PM
You must know what is the topic, and you split the topic into alot of small part.
Ex: With your topic, you can split it into 3 part.
Part 1: Introduce little about yourself, your college.
Part 2: Some reasons to study at College.
Part 3: Conclude what you write, and your feeling...
each part, you can split into small parts. Ex:
In part 2, you can split into 5 small part (or more..).
Part 2.1: your knowledge
Part 2.2: Level of the chool
Part 2.3: Tuition
Part 2.4: Study period
part 2.5: Degree
and each small part, you can split into some smaller part...
I don't know anything about you, about your school, and this is your essay, So I only do something for you. Good Luck

17-03-2007, 04:13 PM
I think the essay is bad. it has alot of errors, and your idea isn't really good. If I were a teacher, you couldn't get over 5 mark. Don't worry, because I think that everything is begun from badness. You can do better if you try. Good luck to you