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trphhai
24-03-2009, 03:55 PM
My friend
I had a very good boy friend when i learn at high school. His names Nhut My, he is not very tall, he has a dark skin, his face is small. He enjoy wear white t-shirt.
He is not only intelligent but also laborious. He often help me to make difficult maths.
He is very kind, he usually smile when we learn together. That i very comfortable
In the past we often went to school by a bicycle. He said: the future i try work to get a lot money, I dont want live in poor. I havent met him since 3 years. I hope we see again on a nearly date

Kvan_2711
24-03-2009, 04:24 PM
[quote=trphhai;247360]My friend
I had a very good boy friend when i learned at high school. His names Nhut My, he was not very tall, he had a dark skin, his face was small. He enjoyed wearing a white t-shirt.
He is not only intelligent but also laborious. He often help me to do difficult maths homework.
He was very kind, he usually smiled when we learned together. That made me more comfortable
In the past we often went to school by bicycle. He said: In the future I'll try work to earn a lot money, I dont want to live in poor. I havent met him for 3 years. I hope we'll meet each other in the near future.

lucky_star_1213
24-03-2009, 10:45 PM
[quote=trphhai;247360]My friend
I had a very good boy friend when i learned at high school. His names Nhut My, he was not very tall, he had a (skin ko đếm được nha bạn) dark skin, his face was small. He enjoyed wearing a white t-shirt.
He is not only intelligent but also laborious. He often helped me to do difficult maths homework.

Bổ sung t xu :sleeping:

..::Scorpior::..
25-03-2009, 11:24 AM
He enjoyed wearing a white t-shirt.
He is not only intelligent but also laborious. He often helped me to do difficult maths homework.
T-shirt ---> T-shirts
Chắc ko fải mặc suốt 1 ci o đu


He is not only intelligent but also laborious.He often helped me to do difficult maths
Cậu chọn 1 th đi , nếu l htại đơn th is đng , help th thm s vo---> helps
Hoặc dng w khứ như ở trn th is---> was , help thm ed như lucky.

doll234
25-03-2009, 02:47 PM
My friend
I had a very good boy friend when i learn at high school. His names Nhut My, he is not very tall, he has a dark skin, his face is small. He enjoy wearing white t-shirt.
He is not only intelligent but also laborious. He often help me to make difficult maths.
He is very kind, he usually smile when we learn together. That i very comfortable
In the past we often went to school by a bicycle. He said: the future i try work to get a lot money, I dont want live in poor. I havent met him for 3 years. I hope we'll see again on a nearly date
mnh sửa vậy đấy:12_003:

doll234
25-03-2009, 02:49 PM
mnh sửa vậy đấy:12_003: mnh nham. cn phải sửa cc cu sang th qu khứ đơn nũa chứ:85:

giacmonhonhoi12
25-03-2009, 05:02 PM
His name’s Nhut My, he is not very tall, he has a dark skin, his face is small
-mnh nghĩ cu ny để hiện tại đơn chứ cu ny tả người m,người th khi no chả thế

F_B_I
25-03-2009, 10:57 PM
My friend
I had a very good boy friend when i learnlearnt at high school. His names Nhut My, he iswas not very tall, he hashad a dark skin, his face iswas small. He enjoined wearing white t-shirt.
He iswas not only intelligent but also laborious. He often helped me to make difficult maths.
He iswas very kind, he usually smiled when we learn together. That i made me very comfortable .
(Em mới đầu khng biết nn chia HTĐ hay QKĐ,nhưng đọc cả bi thấy chị đ xa bạn trai 3 năm,v thế những g chị kể ở trn đều đ l qu khứ,chỉ c ci tn l ko đổi thi nn e nghĩ nn dng QKĐ):41_002:
In the past we often went to school by a bicycle. He said: In the future i will try to work to get a lot of money, I dont want live in poorly. I havent met him since for 3 years. I hope we see again on a nearly date
:21_002: Love is 4ever!!

F_B_I
25-03-2009, 11:02 PM
His names Nhut My, he is not very tall, he has a dark skin, his face is small
-mnh nghĩ cu ny để hiện tại đơn chứ cu ny tả người m,người th khi no chả thế
:59:mnh ko nghĩ thế,mnh nghĩ l QKĐ v v như H Anh Tuấn ấy,ngy xưa anh bo cn by h đ gầy.NHiều bạn ngy xưa xinh nhưng lớn ln lại xấu...Theo mnh th con người lun lun biến đổi v 1 giy trước đ cũng đ gọi l qu khứ huống hồ đy l 3 năm..

vjp_love87
26-03-2009, 02:02 PM
dung hien tai don ta nguoi la dung

ng thnh tm
26-03-2009, 02:22 PM
CU BỊ ĐỘNG ( Passive Voice)
Tc giả: ngannguyen đưa ln lc: 16:00:45 Ngy 23-02-2008
CU BỊ ĐỘNG
(Passive Voice)

1. Bị /Thụ động cch l cch đặt cu trong đ chủ ngữ đứng vai bị động.
V dụ:
1. Chinese is learnt at school by her.
2. A book was bought by her.

Ch : Điều kiện để c thể chuyển cu chủ động sang bị động:
Thứ 1: Cu chủ động phải xc lập c được tn ngữ. (object)
Thứ 2: Cu chủ động phải c Ngoại động từ. (transitive verbs)


2. Qui tắc Cu bị động.
a. Động từ của cu bị động: To be + Past Participle (Pii).
b. Tn ngữ của cu chủ động thnh chủ ngữ của cu bị động
c. Chủ ngữ của cu chủ động thnh chủ ngữ của giới từ "BY"

Active : Subject - Transitive Verb – Object
Passive : Subject - Be+ Past Participle - BY + Object

V dụ: The farmer dinks tea everyday. (Active)
Tea is drunk by the farmer everyday. (Passive)


3. Khi một ngoại động từ ở chủ động c hai tn ngữ, một trực tiếp v một gin tiếp (nhm tặng biếu), c thể chuyển thnh hai cu bị động.
V dụ: I gave him an apple.
An apple was given to him.
He was given an apple by me.

4. Một số cu đặc biệt phải dịch l "Người ta" khi dịch sang tiếng Việt.
V dụ: It is said that = people say that ; (Người ta ni rằng)
It was said that = people said that. (Người ta ni rằng)

Một số động từ được dng như trn: believe, say, suggest, expect, ...

5. Ta dng động từ nguyn thể trong thể bị động:
TO BE + PAST PARTICIPLE để chỉ một định hay sự bắt buộc hoặc sự khng thể được.

V dụ: This exercise is to be done.
This matter is to be discussed soon.


6. Sau những động từ: to have, to order, to get, to bid, to cause hay một động từ chỉ về gic quan hoặc cảm tnh, ta dng Past Participle (Tham khảo phần Bảng động từ bất quy tắc) bao hm nghĩa như bị động:
V dụ: We had your photos taken.
We heard the song sung.

We got tired after having walked for long.

7. Bảng chia Chủ động sang Bị động:

Simple present do done
Present continuous is/are doing is/are being done
Simple Past did was/were done
Past continuous was/were doing was/were being done
Present Perfect has/have done has/have been done
Past perfect had done had been done
Simple future will do will be done
Future perfect will have done will have been done
is/are going to is/are going to do is/are going to be done
Can can, could do can, could be done
Might might do might be done
Must must do must be done
Have to have to have to be done

8. Một số Trường hợp đặc biệt khc:
a. Một số động từ đặc biệt: remember; want; try; like, hate ...
V dụ: I remember them taking me to the zoo. (active)
I remember being taken to the zoo.(passive)

V dụ: She wants her sister to take some photogtaphs.(actiove)
She wants some photographs to be taken by her sister. (passive)

V dụ: She likes her boyfriend telling the truth. (actiove)
She likes being told the truth. (passive)

9. Một số Trường hợp đặc biệt nguyn mẫu c TO: Suppose; see; make;
V dụ: You are supposed to learn English now. (passive)
= It is your duty to learn English now. (active)
= You should learn English now. (active)
V dụ: His father makes him learn hard. (active)
He is made to learn hard. (passive)
V dụ: You should be working now.(active)
You are supposed to be working now.(passive)

V dụ: People believed that he was waiting for his friend (active).
He was believed to have been waiting for his friend.(passive)

ng thnh tm
26-03-2009, 02:27 PM
nho cac ban sua dum minh bai nay nhe.thanks
my home work:
Full name: Ngo Thanh Tam. I was born in Long An province in 1981, but now I live in HCM city.
I have studied at TPHCM University of Industrial since 1999 and have graduated in 2003, specialty organic chemical. I have been working in SAVIMEX corporation since 2003.I am an officer in technology office. Everyday, my job test color. Technology office has got tenth officer, all people are very friendly. Space from my house to place working about one kilometer. I usually go to work by bus. In future, I will learnt English very well and try to attain four hundred and fifty score of Toefl. Moreover I will try pass exam begin master’s degree.

..::Scorpior::..
26-03-2009, 07:56 PM
nho cac ban sua dum minh bai nay nhe.thanks
my home work:

My full name is Ngo Thanh Tam. I was born in Long An province in 1981, but now I live--> I'm living in HCM city.
I have studied at TPHCM University of Industrial Industry since 1999 and have graduated in 2003, specialty organic chemical. I have been working in---> for? SAVIMEX corporation since 2003. I am an officer in the technology office. Everyday, my job is to test color. Technology office has got tenth officers, all people are very friendly. Space Distance from my house to place working is about one kilometer. I usually go to work by bus. In the future, I will learnt English very well and try to attain to?? four hundred and fifty score of Toefl--> TOEFL. Moreover I will try to pass the exam for beginning master’s degree.
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Not like that
04-04-2009, 09:00 PM
My friend
I had a very good boy friend when i learned at high school. His names Nhut My, he is not very tall, he has a dark skin, his face is small. He enjoy wearing white t-shirt.
He is not only intelligent but also laborious. He often used to help me to make difficult math exercises.
He is very kind, he usually smiled when we learn together. That made me very comfortable
In the past we often went to school by a bicycle. He said: In the future i will try work to get a lot of money, I dont want live in poverty. I havent met him since for 3 years. I hope we will see again on a nearly day
Nội dung hơi đơn giản. Viết thm một vi nũa tả thm về người bạn ny , bi viết sẽ sinh động hơn.

Tina_Trang_Viet
07-04-2009, 09:23 AM
dung hien tai don ta nguoi la dung
==> KHNG được viết bi m khng bỏ dấu. lần sau sẽ bị xa m khng thng bo đu đấy nh. Ch nha.:love:

..::Scorpior::..
07-04-2009, 11:28 AM
==> KHNG được viết bi m khng bỏ dấu. lần sau sẽ bị xa m khng thng bo đu đấy nh. Ch nha.:love:
Hnh thức nhẹ c thể bỏ qua, cc mem c tinh thần đưa bi ln sửa đc ri Tina
P.s: vi phạm nhiều xa thẳng tay thiệt :62:

lucky_star_1213
07-04-2009, 06:48 PM
I have studied at TPHCM University of Industrial Industry since 1999 and have graduated in 2003, specialty organic chemicalchả lin quan g đến cu trước cả?.

Distance from my house to place working office is about one kilometer.
Bổ sung:grad:

..::Scorpior::..
07-04-2009, 07:33 PM
I have studied at TPHCM University of Industrial Industry since 1999 and have graduated in 2003,
Lucky này, ńu bỏ have thì thành wá khứ đơn thì since---> in chứ :D
Graduated th w khứ đơn đc ri (xc định tgian ri)

Cn ci dưới no cmt :13_002:

Nhox Sữa Chua =)
07-04-2009, 08:48 PM
score[/U] => c "s" of Toefl.
haha .. sr bon chen t :still_dreaming:

Tina_Trang_Viet
08-04-2009, 08:52 AM
Nguyn văn bởi ng thnh tm http://www.tienganh.com.vn/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.tienganh.com.vn/showthread.php?p=247915#post247915)
nho cac ban sua dum minh bai nay nhe.thanks
my home work:

My full name is Ngo Thanh Tam. I was born in Long An province in 1981, but now I live--> I'm living in HCM city.
I have studied at TPHCM University of Industrial Industry since in 1999 and have graduated in 2003. specialty My speciality is organic chemical. I have been working in---> for? SAVIMEX corporation since 2003. I am an officer in the technology office. Everyday, my job is to test color. Technology office has got tenth officers, all people are very friendly. Space Distance from my house to place workingoffice is about one kilometer. I usually go to work by bus. In the future, I will learnt English very well and try to attain to (đạt được) four hundred and fifty scores of Toefl--> TOEFL. Moreover I will try to pass the exam for beginning masters degree.

Bổ sung thm: mu xanh v mu hồng:grad:
Gộp lại cc lỗi m lucky + Nsc + Scop + tina đ sửa:32_002:

lucky_star_1213
08-04-2009, 01:46 PM
Lucky này, ńu bỏ have thì thành wá khứ đơn thì since---> in chứ :D
Graduated th w khứ đơn đc ri (xc định tgian ri)

Cn ci dưới no cmt :13_002:
Ờ h, km thật, ko để đến:grad:

Not like that
09-04-2009, 09:54 PM
Mnh nghĩ l dng th qu khứ th đng hơn. Đ xa cch 3 năm th hnh dng con người cũng phải khc đi một cht chứ.

..::Scorpior::..
09-04-2009, 10:12 PM
Mnh nghĩ l dng th qu khứ th đng hơn. Đ xa cch 3 năm th hnh dng con người cũng phải khc đi một cht chứ.
C̣u nói bài nào nhỉ ? :01:

leanhthi_20994
01-05-2009, 10:22 AM
My friend
I had a very good boy friend when i learnt at high school. His name iswas Nhut My, he wasn't very tall, he had a dark skin, his face was small. He enjoyed wearing white t-shirt.
He was not only intelligent but also laborious. He often helped me to make difficult maths.
He was very kind, he usually smiled when we learnt together. That i was very comfortable
In the past we often went to school by a bicycle. He said: In the future i try working to get a lot money, I dont want live in poor. I havent met him for 3 years. I hope we'll see again on a nearly date
nếu c g sai th Pm cho mnh tại Id emdepemchanh_khongranhyeuanh_209
thanks:smilie_goodjob::smilie_goodjob:

..::Scorpior::..
01-05-2009, 11:52 AM
to make difficult maths. Help sb do sth..... to make---> do


In the future i try working to get a lot money, I don’t want live in poor”. I haven’t met him for 3 years. I hope we'll see again on a nearly dateIn the future sao cn dng htại ở đy ?
Try to work : cố gắng lm việc
try V-ing : thử
Cậu xem nghĩa n l nghĩa no..

Cc chỗ khc, no idea.

bebezozo
01-05-2009, 12:23 PM
My friend
I had a very good boy friend when i learnt at high school. His name’s Nhut My, he is not very tall, he has a dark skin, his face is small. He enjoyed wearing white t-shirt.
He is not only intelligent but also laborious. He often helped me to do difficult maths.
He is very kind, he usually smiled when we learn together. That i was very comfortable
In the past we often went to school by a bicycle. He said: “ in the future i will try to work to get a lot money, I don’t want to live in poor”. I haven’t met him for 3 years. I hope we'll see again on a nearly date

trn l bi sữa của mnh bạn thấy c vấn đề th nhắn tin lại cho mnh

..::Scorpior::..
01-05-2009, 07:33 PM
He often helped me to do difficult maths.
He is very kind, he usually smiled when we learn together. That i was very comfortable - what does this sentence mean ?

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Vẫn bị chỗ help.:48_002:

bebezozo
01-05-2009, 07:45 PM
I (have) studied at TPHCM University of (Industrial) Industry (since) in 1999 and (have) graduated in 2003,

binhvae
02-05-2009, 10:34 AM
This is my opinion!!!
My friend,
I had a very good boy friend when i learnt at high school. His name was Nhut My, he wasn't very tall, he had a dark skin and a small face. He liked wearing white t-shirt.
He was not only intelligent but also laborious. He often helped me to make difficult maths.
He was very kind, he usually smiled when we learnt together. That i was very comfortable
Previously, we often went to school together by his or my bicycle. He said: “ In the future I will try to earn a lot money, I don’t want to live in a poor living”. I haven’t met him for 3 years. I hope we'll see again on a near date

..::Scorpior::..
02-05-2009, 10:41 AM
He often helped me to make difficult maths.
The same mistake =.=