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chan_nhoi_bong_9x
26-12-2008, 07:40 PM
sửa bi hộ mnh nha:30_002::30_002::30_002:

The Internet:36_002::36_002:
The Internet has rapidly developed and become part your daily life. It is a very fast and convennient way for us to get information. People use the Internet for many purposes: education, communication, entertainment and commerce. The Internet helps people can communicate with their friends and relatives by means of e-mail or chatting.E-mail allows users to send documents, pictures and other data from one part of the world to another in at least 5 minutes. Besides, people also use Internet to relax and get out stress after work hard. People can play video games, listen to music, watch films,....
In addition, the Internet is providing a lot of bussiness aportunities . Some bussinesses are advertising their products on the Internet. People can ues the Internert to do shopping. This save a lot of time. It is possible to use the Internet for education-students may conncect with their teachers from home to send or received e-mail or talk their problems through online rather than attend a class.

Đy l bi biết chuẩn bị cho k thy học sinh giỏi lớp 9 của mnh. K thiếu st hay chưa hay ở fần no xin mọi người sửa v bổ sung choa. Gip em hon thiện phần lỗi ngữ php cũng như lỗi diễn đạt nha.:78::78::78:

shi_chan
27-12-2008, 04:29 PM
The Internet
The Internet has rapidly developed and become part of your daily life. It is a very fast and convennient way for us to get information. People use the Internet for many purposes: education, communication, entertainment and commerce,etc(many muh^^). The Internet helps people can communicate with their friends and relatives by means of e-mail or chatting.E-mail allows users to send documents, pictures and other data from one part of the world to another in at least 5 minutes. Besides, people also use Internet to relax and get out stress after working hard. People can play video games, listen to music, watch films,....
In addition, the Internet is providing a lot of bussiness aportunities(opportunities fải ko??) . Some bussinessesbusinessmen are advertising their products on the Internet. People can use the Internert to do shopping. This saves a lot of time. It is also possible to use the Internet for education-students may connect with their teachers from home to send or received e-mail or talk about their problems through online rather than attend a class.
mnh gip dc chừng ni
^^
:love::love:

..::Scorpior::..
30-12-2008, 05:27 PM
In addition, the Internet is providing a lot of bussiness with aportunities(opportunities fải ko??)

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