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lytrieuvan
08-11-2006, 01:50 PM
Nowadays,the internet is becoming more useful .people said that the internet has more benefits than harmful.Do you agree or disagree.(200 words)

Since the internet was invented ,it is becoming more than popular than it was .It can help you study or entertain.Besides,it has aslo many benefits than many technologies.In my opinion ,the internet will play an important role in society in future.

Firstly, I am going to talk about the first reason that I believe it will . The internet can easy to get information without going anywhere .For example,you can stay at home ,connect to it and looking for the information that you want to find. Furthermore, you can also get a lesson of your class or borrow library books .

This brings me to my second point .this is communication. You can talk with your friends or family in oversea with internet phone , voice chat or webcam.Also ,the lectures can upload their lecture and the students can download it to home to get details.

Finally is entertainment. With the internet service,downloading the music files or movies from website is easy . You can also share your music with others people and play together.It will open the new trend of listening to music.

To sum up , I believe that The internet will be used more common in the technology century.

nxl2410
08-11-2006, 02:48 PM
"looking for the information that you want to find"=> look for
"Finally is entertainment" i think finally is adv so it is not sub. iam not sure
"the lectures can upload their lecture"=> lecturers

nxl2410
08-11-2006, 02:53 PM
mình biết trang web này lâu rồi nhưng giờ mới tham gia.Mong mọi người giúp đỡ mình để mình improve my english skill. cảm ơn mọi người lắm lắm!!!

gianglt
08-11-2006, 09:00 PM
Since the Internet was invented in 1969, it has continually developed and nowadays becomes much more popular than ever before and has great influence on different aspects of life: getting information, communication, production, entertainment and so on. It is easy to see that Internet bring most benefits in the comparison with many other technologies and it will still play an important role in the future.

Internet can be considered as the biggest source of information. Online libraries on Internet are huge multimedia resources. Online newspapers, magazines give us chance to be updated with latest news and information. Different universities provide online courses, which are easily and cheaply to access. Nowadays, people can easily connect Internet without leaving home and use search engines like Google, Yahoo to reach such useful information from everywhere in the world.

Communication is another field, which are quickly developing based on the Internet. Email applications are widely used to help people connected to each other and exchange data files. Moreover, people can talk with their friends and families with internet phones or in chat rooms, even when they are abroad. In near future, new communications will be introduced and will make people more connected.

Last but not least, people can use Internet for the entertainment. Downloading movies or watching them online from websites is an easy job. Also, people can upload music files and share them with others. All these processes open a new trend of entertainment industry in following years.

To sum up, Internet is useful in many fields and affects the development of out society, not only at present time, but also in the future.

longphung
09-11-2006, 05:51 PM
The internet harmful or not?

In the modern world, the internet plays an important role in our life. It is one of kinds of information technology that is developing in material fields strongly. It has been drawing thousands people use currently. This essay will discuss whether the internet harmful or not .

On the 0ne hand, It is undoubted that the internet is very useful with people for varies aims despite of young or elder people. It is a worth knowledge resource for sharing or researching information, rather entertainment and dealing business. The internet has also a part in linking relationships between nations become closer. For example, We civil networks can sit at home and easily touch together as long as the internet is connected.

No matter what, we know, some people are using the internet for their black aims.They spread computer viruses to steal information from its rivals, further more spreading black cultures. It has negative to communities in over the world. On the other hand, it is considered harmfully.



In my opinion , The internet provides more benefits for us inspite of a few harms which still impact positive to our societies as long as We each have a sense of using it.

PS: Hello everybody ! I need your critics about my essay. Just feel free.

bachtuocdo
30-12-2008, 10:48 PM
Mọi người đọc v bớt cht thời gian chỉnh sửa lỗi sai chnh tả v ngữ php gip mnh nh, thank^^:11_002:
There are many different ways of coming with success, this also means that there are many different ways of creating the good future for ourselves. We must prepare knowledge and experience that are indispensable things, in order to create premises for our future (especially for our future job). We have more choices, and... going to university is the best choice for students as us. University is the best training environment for us. In the years studying at university, we are provided knowledge of our future job. We can improve our knowledge, upgrade our ability, accumulate good experience. With the lecturers who have much experience for training students, we may feel assured for knowledges and experiences that we are provided, and we will feel more self-confident and more sure when we set to our future job. Moreover, in the last year, we are come to practise, in order to get used to actual work environment,and that contributes to our success in our future job. Futhermore, we can participate in the foreign courses, the clubs, the festivals, and so on they help us to increase dynamism, feel more self-confident and more grow-up.
Therefore, we make sure to go to university is the best choice for students, in order to grow-up, create the good future and success.

cng cha cực cute
30-12-2008, 11:16 PM
Mọi người đọc v bớt cht thời gian chỉnh sửa lỗi sai chnh tả v ngữ php gip mnh nh, thanks^^:11_002:
There are many different ways to comeing with to success, and (cần c từ nối 2 cu với nhau) this also means (that) there are many different ways to createing the good future for ourselves. We must prepare knowledge and experience that are indispensable things, in order to create premises for our futures (especially for our future job). We have more choices, and... going to university is the best choice for students (as us). University is the best training environment for us. In the years studying at university, we are provided knowledge of for our future jobs. We can improve our knowledge, upgrade our ability, accumulate good experience. With the lecturers who have much experience of training students, we may feel assured for knowledges and experiences that we are provided, and we will feel more self-confident and more sure (nn đổi từ khc cho hay hơn bạn ơi, hj`) when we set to our future job. Moreover, in the last year, we are come to practise, in order to get used to get accustomed to (mnh nghĩ vậy đng hơn k) the actual work environment (no comma) and that contributes to our success in our future job. Futhermore, we can participate in the foreign courses, the clubs, the festivals, and so on… they help us to increase dynamism, feel more self-confident and more grow-up.
Therefore, we make sure that to go going to university is the best choice for students, in order to grow-up, create the good future and success.
Bạn xem lại phần phrasal verbs h. Ch chữ "provide" n:
C1: provide s.b (with s.th)
C2: provide s.th (for s.b)
>>> Mnh gp vậy thui, cc pc no thấy cn sai xin chỉ jp:32_002:

..::Scorpior::..
31-12-2008, 12:20 PM
cng cha ny, hỏi t. Hm Stike trong 4rum ny dng thế no? Sửa bi m ko c th ghi bỏ chỗ ny chỗ kia khổ qu h h.

cng cha cực cute
01-01-2009, 03:55 PM
Scorpior, bạn l j`? Sorry nh, mnh hok hỉu lắm. Bạn ni r hơn đc hok?
P/S: sr 4 spamming

..::Scorpior::..
01-01-2009, 04:39 PM
Scorpior, bạn l j`? Sorry nh, mnh hok hỉu lắm. Bạn ni r hơn đc hok?
P/S: sr 4 spamming
Thi, trong fần advanced c rồi :) :13_002:

Fusilier De Francais
02-01-2009, 12:50 PM
Theo Oxford Advanced Learner's Dictionary

[vn] provide sb (with sth) | provide sth (for sb) to give sth to sb or make it available for them to use
SYN supply:
The hospital has a commitment to provide the best possible medical care. We are here to provide a service for the public. We are here to provide the public with a service. Please answer questions in the space provided. The report was not expected to provide any answers.

Ch : provide sb (with sth) | provide sth (for sb) << with sth trong ngoặc đơn chỉ c thể thm hay ko thm. Ko bắt buc!

"Ngn ngữ vẫn l ngn ngữ, phải sng tao. Ko nn qu gio điều m lm cho n kh khan mất đi sự trong sng của n."

:)

b chằn
02-01-2009, 02:51 PM
people said that internet has more benefits#..... had...

b chằn
02-01-2009, 03:01 PM
people said that internet had(not has)

b chằn
02-01-2009, 03:20 PM
it becomes more popular than it was
finally l 1 adv khng phải l 1 subject theo mnh th bạn phải viết l finally, you can relax on internet. đ chỉ l kiến của mnh thui bạn tham khảo thử nha.