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nguyencanhtrung
15-12-2008, 11:23 PM
Present for your love.
A present can express your feeling to the person who is given.There fore,what you give is very important,especially if person who is given is your love.In order to have such meaningful gift, you should follow this steps.First,you must know what your love like.It can be a teddy bear,a ring,a necklace,or a bunch of flower.This is very important because if you give her desired of her taste present,she will understand how much pay attention to her.Second,you must see on what occasion you will give that present.For example,you should not give a teddy bear on the day 8/3.In stead,you should give a bunch of flowers.Finally,when you go to the supermarket in order to choose a present,you should go with a girl friend.She is advisory person for you and help you to bargain.These are steps that will help you to conquer your love,and help her to comprehend you.I think sudden girl will very happy with her love present.

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halinhminh
16-12-2008, 09:39 AM
Present for your love lover.
A present can express your feeling to the person who is given receives it.There fore,what you give is very important,especially if that person who is given is your love lover.In order to have such a meaningful gift, you should follow this these steps. First firstly,you must know what your love is like. It can be a teddy bear,a ring,a necklace,or a bunch of flower flowers.This is very important because if you give her desired of her taste present an expected present, she will understand how much you pay attention to care for her. Second secondly,you must see on what occasion you will give that present. For example, you should not give a teddy bear on the Women day 8/3.In stead instead, you should give a bunch of flowers. Finally,when you go to the supermarket in order to choose a present,you should go with a girl friend girlfriend.She is advisory person for you will be your advisor and help you to bargain.These are steps that will help you to conquer your love lover,and help her to comprehend you.I think sudden girl will be very happy with her love lover's/lovely present.

Mnh đang học thể loại Process paragraphs.Mong cc bạn gip mnh kiểm tra grammar,speeling and punctuation. Cảm ơn cc bạn rất nhiều:01:
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