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thanhhai 25234
11-07-2008, 07:49 AM
Mnh muốn viết 1 đoạn tiếng anh 8 đến 10 cu g đ mong cc a chị chỉ cho em dn bi(vd: viết về tương lai của mnh sắp tới sẽ lm j) mong a chị chỉ gip cm ơn
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wellfrog
16-07-2008, 05:10 PM
Mnh muốn viết 1 đoạn tiếng anh 8 đến 10 cu g đ mong cc a chị chỉ cho em dn bi(vd: viết về tương lai của mnh sắp tới sẽ lm j) mong a chị chỉ gip cm ơn
:whistling1::D:whistling1:
Bạn c thể dng th tương lai gần để viết về cc dự định của mnh.
Next week, I am going to visit my grandmother in Hanoi. Rồi bạn viết tiếp đi với ai, đi bằng phương tiện g, đến đ rồi dự định thăm những nơi no? khi no về ..... cứ viết đi rồi quen thi

Siken
12-08-2008, 12:48 PM
Bạn c thể ni về tương lai của mnh sẽ lm nghề j. bạn thch nghề g? Tại sao lại thch nghề đ? Bạn sẽ lm g để ước mơ đ thnh hiện thưc.. v nếu đạt dc ạn sẽ lm g tiếp theo...
Ex: I would like to be a tourist guide because I can go everỷwhere...

2_Jung_YunHo
18-08-2008, 11:25 PM
Đầu tin cũng nn ni sơ qua về bản thn, hiện tại đang lm g, ri mong mn trong tương lai được lm g, sẽ lm những g để thực hiện ước mơ đ....
Cứ bắt tay vo viết đi ri mới bt mnh nn viết g bạn ạh. Viết đến đu nghĩ tp đến đ. Hum ney viết xong ri, mai nghĩ ra thm 1 nữa th lại bổ sung.
Bạn chỉ cần nhớ l "mn lm việc g th phải hnh động chứ khng chỉ suy nghĩ khng th khng được g đu"

2_Jung_YunHo
18-08-2008, 11:49 PM
Đy l bi topic của mnh. Chủ đề l "Your plans and ambitions". Mnh cũng khng chắc chắn l n đng ngữ php 100% v viết theo lối văn ni. Bạn tham khảo nh.
Everyone have their plans and ambitions. People want to be doctors, otherone want to be a teacher. Me too. Now, I'm 20 and I think I'm old enought to have my plans in the future.
I'm the second years student of IT. Of course, in the future , I want to be a good computer engineer. The fist, I'm going to study many programs of computer and foreign languages, exspecially English, because , they'll help my job
After University, I want to work for big company such as FPT !!!:fingerscrossed:
I'll make the most famous vius. And I hope , it'll kill all other vius. Then, I want to have my own big computer shop. In my computer shop, there are every kind of computer's spareports such as: Rom, USB, printing machine , loudspeaker , mouse , keyboard, disk , electronic chips of computer ... And the last, I want to every one in the world know me :77:

Tina_Trang_Viet
19-08-2008, 01:03 PM
Everyone has his own plans and ambitions. People want to be a doctor, other want to be a teacher. I’m 20 years old now and I think I’m old enough to have the plans in the future.

I’m in my second year and study at IT. Of course, in the future, I want to be a good computer engineer. First, I’m going to study many programs of computer. Beside, I will learn another languages, especially English, because it’s useful with my jobs.

After graduating from University, I want to work for a large company such as FPT. I’ll create the most famous viruses. And I hope , it'll kill all other viruses. Then, I want to have my own computer shop. In my computer shop, there are every kind of computer's spare-parts such as: Ram, USB, printing machine , loudspeaker , mouse , keyboard, disk, electronic chips of computer ... Finally , I want everybody in the world to know me.
Mnh mạn php gp sửa bi của bạn(theo của bạn đ viết). Chứ theo mnh th bi viết của bạn lủng củng n lm sao ấy.(đừng giận nha)hihi

2_Jung_YunHo
19-08-2008, 10:58 PM
Mnh mạn php gp sửa bi của bạn(theo của bạn đ viết). Chứ theo mnh th bi viết của bạn lủng củng n lm sao ấy.(đừng giận nha)hihi

Đ gọi l gp cn sợ bị người ta giận h??? :)Hem seo đu !!!
Bi ny mnh viết theo kiểu văn ni m !!!
Sẽ ch sửa chữa theo lời bạn !!! ukie !!

daothithuong
20-08-2012, 01:43 PM
I graduationed Hue college of economic last year. Then I worked in the supermarket, I was cashier for a while. My dream was to work in the tax industry. So that, I have been improvementing knowledge of English. I will do my homeworks, although success or failure but also give me a litle experience. I hope that, I will get over exam of officer next month.
.........

Mọi người kỉm tra, chỉnh sửa và góp ý giúp mình nha!!!!!

daothithuong
20-08-2012, 01:59 PM
Sửa bài đi mọi người, kín thứ mình còn ŕt ŕt hạn ch́. Mọi người giúp mình với

LHX
23-09-2012, 06:10 AM
I graduationed Hue college of economic last year. Then I worked in the supermarket, I was cashier for a while. My dream was to work in the tax industry. So that, I have been improvementing knowledge of English. I will do my homeworks, although success or failure but also give me a litle experience. I hope that, I will get over exam of officer next month.
.........

Mọi người kỉm tra, chỉnh sửa và góp ý giúp mình nha!!!!!

Ill edit your relatively short essay.

I graduated from Hue College of Economics last year. Following my graduation, I accepted a cashier position working for a supermarket for a while. Since my dream is to work as a tax accountant in the future, I have tried to improve my English knowledge. I am willing to do a lot of homework, and whether I succeed or fail, thats not as important as learning and benefiting from my experience. I hope I will be successful in my Credit Officer exam next month.

If you have more ideas about what you want to do, but find it difficult to express yourself in English, just write in Vietnamese and Ill translate your text into English.

LHX
23-09-2012, 06:33 AM
Everyone has his own plans and ambitions. People want to be a doctor, other want to be a teacher. I’m 20 years old now and I think I’m old enough to have the plans in the future.

I’m in my second year and study at IT. Of course, in the future, I want to be a good computer engineer. First, I’m going to study many programs of computer. Beside, I will learn another languages, especially English, because it’s useful with my jobs.

After graduating from University, I want to work for a large company such as FPT. I’ll create the most famous viruses.And I hope , it'll kill all other viruses. Then, I want to have my own computer shop. In my computer shop, there are every kind of computer's spare-parts such as: Ram, USB, printing machine , loudspeaker , mouse , keyboard, disk, electronic chips of computer ... Finally , I want everybody in the world to know me.
Mnh mạn php gp sửa bi của bạn(theo của bạn đ viết). Chứ theo mnh th bi viết của bạn lủng củng n lm sao ấy.(đừng giận nha)hihi

I have slightly tweaked an already well-edited job by you:

Everyone has his own plans and ambitions. Some people want to be a doctor while others want to be a teacher. As for me, I’m 20 years of age and old enough to have made a plan for my future.

Currently, I am a second year student majoring in IT. I certainly wish to become a good computer engineer in the future. Toward that goal, I am going to study hard and master as many computer programs as possible. Moreover, I will learn a foreign language, especially English, because it will be quite useful in my job.

After my university graduation, I want to work for a large company such as FPT. I will create the most famous anti-virus program, one that can exterminate all other viruses. Then, I will have my own company that carries all kinds of computer spare parts and accessories such as DRAM’s, USBs, printers, mouse, keyboards, loudspeakers, ROM and RAM disks, chips, motherboards etc. Eventually, I want everybody in the world to recognize my name.