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kiddragon1412
31-05-2008, 02:13 AM
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đề này yêu cầu viết 1 bài luận về sự tồn tại của UFO nhưng em làm toàn sai ngữ pháp cơ bản+ văn dở nên chắc mất hết điểm:wallbash::wallbash:
Do từ vựng hạn chế+ kiến thức chưa vững nện bài em làm như sau:
THE EXISTENCE OF UFOS
Until now , The existence of ufos is still a mystery .Nobody know in detail about this problem. If so, do you belive that there is ufo exist ?I will answer that question in this essay.

First of all , let’s find some information about it . UFOS are strange flying objects that many peple report they have seen in the sky and they have thought that are spacecrafts from other planets. In odrer to understand in detail , I will show some evidences about it. Firstly , in 1954 ,a woman and her children believed they have seen a UFO above their house . Secondly ,in 1960 , a man had fullname was Tom Edward reported he had seen a UFO when he was going to work. Thirdly , in 1967 , a student saw a man was being captured by aliens in the spacecraft which is above that man’s house.
Base on the data which I have shown and in my opinion , I think the existence of ufos is real. But nowadays, many scientists still don’t think so. And you, what do you think about it?

Perhaps to answer above question , we should wait until scientists have the true evidences about this problem.

mọi người nhận xét và sửa lại cho hay hơn nhé:smilie_goodjob::smilie_goodjob:
Nếu ai có ḷng th́ làm giúp em 1 bài mẫu với:(:(
Thân!!
:grad::grad:

hoangmai1992
03-06-2008, 05:35 PM
THE EXISTENCE OF UFOS
Until now , The existence of ufos is still a mystery .Nobody knows in detail about this problem. If so, do you belive that there is ufo's existance ?I will answer that question in this essay.

First of all , let’s find some information about it . UFOS are strange flying objects that many peple report they have seen in the sky and they have thought that they are spacecrafts from other planets. In odrer to understand in detail , I will show some evidences about it. Firstly , in 1954 ,a woman and her children believed they have seen a UFO above their house . Secondly ,in 1960 , a man had fullname was named Tom Edward reported he had seen a UFO when he was going to work. Thirdly , in 1967 , a student saw a man was being captured by aliens in the spacecraft which was above that man’s house.
Basing on the data which I have shown and in my opinion , I think the existence of ufos is real. But nowadays, many scientists still don’t think so. And you, what do you think about it?

Perhaps to answer the above question , we should wait until scientists have the true evidences about this problem.
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đây là đề thi học ḱ của lớp 9 à
mấy cái VD toàn trong sgk lớp 9 này
trg nào thi thế này cũng chơi khó hs đấy :D

đề này mà cho ko ở ngoài th́ chỉ có nói phét đc thôi :)