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kiemmi
19-05-2008, 10:17 AM
For life
i like eating fruit because the fruit is very good for my health but...the fruit is depened on season .
in summer, it is very hot so a water-melon is very cool for us on this days.Merery,an orange or lemon juice help for u lower hot ,too.Opposite summer, winter is very cold so we can eat the fruit just have in winter such as:strawberrys, pomeloes,... .With a strawberry cocktail or some strawberry will help u very fresh in winter days and a pomely is the fruit can replace for an orange.
But..if u eat just one kiwi,kiwi will replace for all fruit.Kiwi is the fruit is indispensable for the life of everybody
Finally, i advise everybody to eat fruit evryday so golden health:grad:

cng cha cực cute
07-07-2008, 11:19 PM
For life
I like eating fruit because the fruit is very good for my health, and the fruit is also depened on season
In summer, it is very hot so a water-melon is very cool for us on these days. Merery(chữ j tha n?),an orange or lemon juice helps u you (ko viết tắt) for lowering hot (temperature),too.Opposite summer By contrast , winter is very cold so we can eat the fruit just have in winter such as:strawberrys, pomeloes,... .With a strawberry cocktail or some strawberries will help u very fresh (chời, sao lại dng "fresh" tha bạn, nghĩa f hợp?) in winter days and a pomely(what does it mean?) is the fruit can replace for an orange. However..if you just eat kiwi, kiwi will replace for all fruit. (Ton cu ny sao mnh ko hu j ht ?)Kiwi is the fruit that (or which đều đc) indispensable for everybody's life. Finally, I advise everybody to eat fruit everyday so because of golden health:grad:

success
08-07-2008, 11:27 AM
For life
i like eating fruit because the fruit it is very good for my health but...the fruit is depeneddepends on season .
in summer, it is very hot so a water-melon is very cool for us on this these days. Merely,an orange or lemon juice can help for u lower hot ,too.OppositeUnlike summer, winter is very cold so we can eat the fruit which we just have in winter such as:strawberries, pomeloes,etc .With a strawberry cocktail or some strawberries will help u very fresh in winter days and a pomelo is the fruit which can replace for an orange.
But if u eat just one kiwi, kiwi it will replace for all kinds of fruit.Kiwi is the fruit is indispensable for the life of everybody
Finally, i advise everybody to eat fruit everyday sofor a golden health:grad:
Trnh lặp từ m sau but đừng thm 3 chấm
Những ci liệt k: such as :A, B, etc. hoặc l such as:A, B, and C. đừng 3 chấm