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[lulêyn]

When we learn university, we have to choose a living place. It‘s also important for students to live far house. They will have 2 places to choose. The first is dormitory and the second is rooming house.
Dormitory is a living place for student. If you live here, you don’t have to do housework and never feel boring, because you will live with many students. Living in a dormitory is safe for student. On the other hand it isn’t the best place to learn, because it’s so noise. Living in a rooming house is different with dormitory. You will live independently, so you can cook and live together with your friends. It’s a good place to learn. In addition it’s so quite and cheaper than dormitory, but living in the rooming house isn’t safe for student. So you have to take care your self, it will bring some experience for you. Maybe you can grow up when you live here.
You should have a good decision. Both dormitory and rooming house have advantages and disadvantages. Your option belongs to your favors. And you will choose a good place for you.

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[wellfrog]

When we learn in university, we have to choose a living place. It‘s also important for students to who live far from house. They will have 2 places to choose. The first one is dormitory and the second other is rooming house.( khi có 2 yếu tố htì không dùng first ,second mà dùng one ,the other )
Dormitory is a living place for students to stay after school . If you live here, you don’t have to do the housework and never feel boring bored , because you will live with many other students. Living in a dormitory is safe for students. On the other hand it isn’t the best place to learn, because it’s so noisey. Living in a rooming house is different with from dormitory. You will live independently, so you can cook and live together with your friends. It’s a good place to learn. In addition ,it’s so quite and cheaper than a dormitory, but living in the a rooming house isn’t safe for students. So you have to take care your self, because it will bring some experience for to you. Maybe you can grow up when you live here.
You should have a good wise decision. Both dormitory and rooming house have advantages and disadvantages. Your option belongs to depends on your favors. And you will choose a good place for you.

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